Today we had to edit a post and I chose my blog tour. We had to make changes to it.The changes I made weremaking the writing bigger and I added more sentences.
Super effort Joshua, you have added lots more information to explain your learning and it lets your audience get more of an idea of what you have been doing too. Next time you could use the preview button before you post just to check the format and the font in your post look how you want them to. Thanks for sharing your learning. Mr Riceman.
Super effort Joshua, you have added lots more information to explain your learning and it lets your audience get more of an idea of what you have been doing too. Next time you could use the preview button before you post just to check the format and the font in your post look how you want them to. Thanks for sharing your learning. Mr Riceman.
ReplyDeleteHi,Mr Riceman thank you for checking my blog out.I hope you had a great time looking at on my blog.
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